The old self dying away, you can feel it, can hear
a skeletal crack, then snap, as a ridgeline
breaks all down the thorax, the bony carapace
splitting, a faint odor lifting off, burnt hair
and a wet sizzle, the new lying there almost fetid
with freshness, with its own moist softness—
fetal, or maybe just larval, tender, exposed.
On all sides water, this again, the spit of land
liminal, pelagic, far from dry, your very steps
leaving an imprint in grass. Tomorrow you could return,
matching your prints to the day before—this day—
a child's game. Is that where the fractures go?
Now you walk emancipated, on the loose—out of the house,
its stale air, parents gone at last—grown-up, free.